Please give me a chance on this one, I just recently got into art- Here's my view of Shadowrise

http://johnnyfau.deviantart.com/#/d4223cu a failed attempt at art

If that doesn't satisfy anyone, here's a poem

A distant, pale, and fading blue
A cast of dreary shadow view
A thousand drifting neon green
Floating through a dark ravine
A subtle shift of dark and light
Of shadow creatures in the night
A danger that stands off alone
Waiting on an empty throne

Twisting towers reach above
A land devoid of hate or love
Where soft a delicate creature sleeps
And beside her form a blind king weeps
But forever shall not pass them by
As a sister queen slowly dies
A hope remains a pact of glass
To wait for silent death to pass